<div dir="ltr">Thank you for your feedback. I have written the Abstract and Motivation.<div><br></div><div>If my English is poor please let me know. Also let me know any other comments or criticism you may have.</div><div><br></div><div>Thank you,</div><div>Jona</div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">2015-02-21 22:34 GMT+09:00 Pavol Rusnak <span dir="ltr">&lt;<a href="mailto:stick@gk2.sk" target="_blank">stick@gk2.sk</a>&gt;</span>:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><span class="">On 21/02/15 14:20, 木ノ下じょな wrote:<br>
&gt; I have put together a proposal for a new generation methodology of HD<br>
&gt; wallets.<br>
<br>
</span>Your proposal is missing Abstract and Motivation sections. Abstract<br>
tells us WHAT are trying to achieve, Motivation tells WHY. It&#39;s not<br>
worth to dig into technical details of your implementation until these<br>
two questions are answered.<br>
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Best Regards / S pozdravom,<br>
<br>
Pavol Rusnak &lt;<a href="mailto:stick@gk2.sk">stick@gk2.sk</a>&gt;<br>
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